Another Friday, another Flash 55. Thanks for the concept, G-man, this has become my favorite blogging activity of the week. The idea is to write a story in exactly 55 words. Head over to Mr.Knowitall's place to join in. This one is adapted from the beginning of a longer piece I wrote long ago. Here it is:He put his hand first on his own knee, then moved it over a few inches to mine. He didn't kiss me, which filled me with such tenderness that I gripped his hand until he told me to ease up--he wasn't going anywhere. And it was true.
He was filled with the same tenderness.
6 comments:
love the title and how that adds so much...tender 55. i like it!
mine is uP!
What a loving post, I really love this so much.
Remind me of my late Dad.
EXCELLENT 55!
Happy 55!
Happy Friday Follow!
Happy Round Robin!
Happy Friday Family!
Have you a ROCKING and SEXY WEEKEND!
hugs
shakira
FLASH FRIDAY-WHEN WILL IT END?
WITH KAJ TANG-REN LINEHAN
Like Brian said, The title makes the story come alive.
My 55: A Familiar Face
Sometimes you just know when something is built to last.
Alicia, what a sweet loving 55.
Excellent job My Dear.
You sure ROCKED this one.
Thanks for playing and visiting today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
The title PROVES it too! :)
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