Friday, May 14, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday--Snow Cone Stand

I'm back with a Flash Friday 55:

Ginny dropped two quarters into her apron pocket and said, “Hey girl!” as Julie approached.

Julie’s pigtails and shoelaces flapped with each step, “Hey! One rainbow snow cone with extra syrup.”

“Seventy-five cents, please.”

“Even for me?” Julie asked.

Ginny tapped the sign—extra syrup, 25 cents— and said, “I’ve got a business to run.”

3 comments:

g-man said...

Cherry Please!!
Loved your 55 Alicia.
The link worked just fine..
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Brian Miller said...

the snow cones made me think of summer...and if i gave all my friends a free ride...i'd never pay for that bike as a kid...lol.

nice 55.

mine is up!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, business is business, I guess!
I wish I could have an ice cream right now!